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Critiques
When I look at this picture, it leaves me wanting more. Once I get over the initial reaction, there's really nothing left for my eyes to view except for the girl playing in the sand. If I could give you any advice, it would to have made this a wide picture, placing the girl on the right side of the picture and the ocean on the left so there is more 'eye candy' to look at. I wasn't there, so I don't know how the landscape was to the left or how dramatic the sky was, but those two elements are what could have given this picture that extra edge.
Great shot though and I do like how you composed it. Just giving you something to think about since you requested critiques
-Michael Dalberti
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